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Subject: Stallworld HOF


  Posted by: RecycledSpinalFluid - [1924582] Sat, Aug 10, 2002, 02:54

Just noticed this:

Stallworld's Official Hall of Fame.

Who is that "Dave Hall" guy? He sounds pretty good.
 
1RecycledSpinalFluid
      ID: 1924582
      Sat, Aug 10, 2002, 03:01
BTW...any HOF without mentioning the likes of Greg Robinson, Richard Paganelli, Mark Mendoza, Chris Jensen, Brian Talmadge, etc. is no HOF in my book.

The real Fantasy Game HOF
 
2Almighty dollar
      ID: 21725103
      Sat, Aug 10, 2002, 03:25
Hey, TSN, how about using some of your Ultimate bucks to hire an editor?

"... the criteria for gaining access to TSN's elite HOF remains very specific."

No, "... the criteria ... remain very specific."

"The criteria for induction into the Hall of Fame is subject to change ..."

No, "... the criteria ... are subject to change ..."

"So without further adieu... "
(So without further farewell?)

It's "without further ado."
Also, if you're going to use an ellipsis at the end of a sentence, it should consist of four dots, not three.

Are there other mistakes in the article? Oh, yes.
 
3Micheal
      ID: 121202620
      Sat, Aug 10, 2002, 04:32
Dude, who cares as long as they pay up?
 
4cancermoon
      ID: 53248219
      Sat, Aug 10, 2002, 05:25
Weird thing is, I trust TSN now as i know about them, but when i search the net for competitions, there are hundreds to chose from, the way i tend to chose is by how professional they are, if I found a fantasy site I have never heard of, that says they pay money as prizes, but i saw they have so much bad grammar or spelling, I would quickly doubt whether they were a legitimate business or not.

Infact spelling and grammar errors are one of the biggest marketing no no's in internet business, and drives away more potential customers than you'd imagine.
 
5Bungers
      Leader
      ID: 525542313
      Sat, Aug 10, 2002, 11:15
"i" believe cancermoon is "infact" a very ironic person. ;)
 
6Micheal
      ID: 19740220
      Sat, Aug 10, 2002, 23:55
Well then, seeing as how you trust them despite all their grammar errors just goes to show that bad grammar doesn't necessarily mean bad service.

"...hundreds to choose from..."
 
7Perm Dude
      Leader
      ID: 2065918
      Sun, Aug 11, 2002, 00:08
I don't know that he's saying that bad grammar equates to bad service, Michael. It's more that companies which show bad grammar are less likely to get the opportunity to show their service at all, good or bad.

When I look over resumes for my company, for example, I just toss out any with spelling or grammar errors. Now, the TSN page in question certainly should not rise to the same level as a resume, but several gramatical errors on the same page reflects poorly on their company.

A short note to Erik or Bernie would seem to be appropriate here.

pd
 
8Species
      Sustainer
      ID: 7724916
      Sun, Aug 11, 2002, 00:28
WORD , RSF (post #2)
 
9Micheal
      ID: 19740220
      Sun, Aug 11, 2002, 01:00
Point taken, PD.
 
10¤ Mario LeMoose ¤
      ID: 076111
      Sun, Aug 11, 2002, 01:06
Hockey winners ignored.
:-(

Hi, PD.
:-)
 
11El Tel
      ID: 56423193
      Sun, Aug 11, 2002, 02:31
Much ado about nothing.
 
12cancermoon
      ID: 53248219
      Sun, Aug 11, 2002, 03:34
Micheal I trust them because now i know them, with a bit of comprehension you may have worked out i was referring to people who come across TSN for the first time.

As for my error, hmmn, I was trying to spell like an american, don't they spell everything how it sounds??